Thursday, April 19, 2012

Paradise Lost: The Modern Version




Write the modern English version!

8 comments:

  1. GROUP NUMBER 6
    Autumn Goffnett, Hunter Findley, Tad Stoner
    By the right of War, he is forced to do everything in hell. They are forced to undergo eternal punishment. The dude replied "You are forced to do all this stuff you wimp, we will never be good to you. We enjoy being evil to you. It is pointless to resist. If he seeks to cause good, we will stop you. Often, it may succeed. If I need to disturb him, he will be bloody angry. A whole bunch of bad things will happen.

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  2. Group 3: Jasmine Austin & Jazzmin Krause

    Out in the distance the angel saw
    the horrible situation, a wild wasteland
    a horrible dungeon, that was in a circle
    where there were flames but these flames there was no light just darkness
    It's only purpose to inspire sadness
    places of sadness, clouds of dismal thoughts
    Here you will never have peace, or find hope
    You will never come to peace, and forever be tortured
    you will be hit with waves of fire
    that are fed with never ending sulfur
    A place created just for those who rebel
    Their prison is shrouded in complete darkness and is placed as far from God and the light of Heaven, twice as far below the earth's surface as the heavens are above it
    How different it was from Heaven!
    There were the others who were sent down to hell with him
    they were being overwhelmed with floods, whirlwinds, and violent fire
    He soon senses someone thrashing by his side
    Someone of equal power,who committed an equally as bad crime.

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  3. Adam and Eve committed the first sin, taking the fruit off of the tree they weren't supposed to touch. They brought death from this act, worry, and the loss of Eden. They had to wait for the one person who could put order back. So in Oreb, and Sinai, a heavenly thinker, inspired a shepherd to teach the lessons on how heaven and earth rose up out of a state of utter confusion. Sion hill delighted him.Quickly the messenger of god required my amazing singing. No intention of flight above the mountain, while it follows things not tried. Teach me because you knew first. In front of me,with big wings spread out, bird like on a dark void.what in me is a dark light.it is low, raise and support. That to the height of this awesome argument. I may push eternal place, and tell the ways of god to man. Say first (heaven hides nothing from the view, not even the deep tract of hell) say first what cause moved our cool parents, in that happy state.(group 1; Quinn, katlyn, Aaron

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  4. They recovered their stength,
    but not by supernatural powers.
    "is this the place, the soil the clime"
    someone said... "this is the seat that we must change for heaven? this sad gloom for that celestial light? let it be, since he who is now sovereign can remove and bet what shall be right. farthest from him is best,who has reason equal, force that's supreme.
    above his equals. goodbye happy fields.
    where joy lives. Hail, horrors. Hail infernal world! and terrible hell.
    Come new teacher, who brings a mind that will never be changed by place or time.
    the mind is its own place, and it can make its own heaven and hell. no matter where, if i'm the same, and what i should be, all but less than he who has thunder. here at least we are free. God may not have built here for his envy, will not drive us hence . here we have secured power, and choice to reign is worth ambition, though in hell: better to reign in hell than serve in heaven. but wherefore let our friends. the people we lose.Lets lie the underworld river. share in this unhappy mansion.with rallied arms to try what maybe yet regained in heaven, Or what is lost in hell?

    GROUP 9! Taylor, Kendra, And ray.

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  5. Group 2: Zack Keehbauch, Devon Helms, Dakota Benson

    People wanted Heaven to fail, it stopped one from doing what they pleased. Who tricked the people by telling them lies they could rebel against and it be better? It t'was the Devil, that snake, full of envy and high on revenge, betrayed Eve, which thou' struck him out of Heaven as well with his followers helping with inspiration. He was King of the rebel angels, he was equal to God, he wanted God's throne, the highest there could be, started a war between Heaven and Hell. God struck the Earth of burning flames, driving the Sinful down deep into the ground to suffer for life in flames and chains. God doesn't have to worry no more about rebel angels, thy struck them to Hell for life, tormenting of his great Wrath. He still watches as far as angels can see.

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  6. Group #4: Faith Trainor, Brooke Seymour, Katy McCarthy

    I'm miserable.
    I was thrown into hell.
    God proved to be stronger with his thunder.
    Until then, no one knew how strong he was.
    He was also underestimated for what else he could do when he was angry.
    Should I try to redeem myself?
    Though I have changed in appearance, I have not changed on the inside.
    The good part of myself is gone.
    God raised me to want to win.
    It brought about a lot of armed spirits that didn't like the power he had.
    Their powers opposed each other as they fought on the planes of Heaven.
    They shook his throne.
    Would Heaven be lost?
    They cannot be conquered because of their will to fight, want for revenge, hate for the opponents, and courage that cannot be shaken.
    What else do they have to overcome?
    He will never forget the glory and wrath that God has.
    If you defy his power, you must bow down to God and ask for forgiveness.
    It'd bring the person shame.
    God's strength and imperialism cannot fail.
    He has been through it.

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  7. Group 5

    Mary Enfield. Maggie McFarlane, Mo Miller

    The devil is regretting rebelling against god and he is begging to be forgiven, he then goes on to describe how powerful and great god is and how he needs to be forgiven by him to be accepted, then a angel appears and tell him how he screwed up royally and how he will never be forgiven, Satan then says 'oh powerful god please forgive me I'm sorry I started a rebellion' and he then goes on to say 'I don't know how you came about, but you are here and you are awesome forgive me King'and the devil is now sad that he got him and all the other angels that followed after him stuck in hell for all eternity, all happiness and hope, and comfort is gone from hell and it is a horrible and depressing, fiery place, but god can restore us as long as we believe in him and the devil is still keeping hope that he can sustain

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  8. Group 7: Layne and Reice :)
    stop
    the chair of no light
    safe the flames of the fire
    thin pale people
    from the top of the waves
    resting at the harbor
    and putting our powers back together
    talk about how we are mean to people
    the people we don't like, we don't try to get back that friendship
    how we overcome something
    what strength we regained from hope
    the answer from loss of hope
    though Satan is talking to his best friend
    with your head and eyes held high
    his body sparkling
    he talks about Satan. He compares Satan to several mythological and biblical figures.

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