Thursday, April 19, 2012

Paradise Lost: The Modern Version 5th Hour


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  2. do you see that dreary plain over there, with no light,save the light of these flames.the waves are tossing us.if there is any rest, it would stop. resembling are defeated powers.consult our enemy over our loss,. what insurance do we gain from hope, what do we gain.the devil talking to its mates above water.his oddly large parts are floating around. he was as big as a monster size. earth born,that were on jov or typhoons, who the god held.or the seabeast that god created his hugest who swam ocean stream.him happily sleeping on foam, as the night skipped. deeming some land off as seamen tell. with fixed anchor in ground, oors by his side as he invest in the see waiting til morning.



    by jory melancon and kyle dirtybird shomin group 7

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  3. Group 8- Danni and David
    Stuck on a burning lake, never before raised his head as heaven allowed him to let him do as he pleased with the permission of heaven seeking evil he brought evil to others as he has done the things that got him in hell while seeking evil to others by giving things to people to try and seduce them. Terrible confusion on himself from the evil

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  4. Group 4 Alexis - Marcus

    Misery and I are now together,
    From above we see a pit,
    The harder you fall, the more force that is going to be upon you,
    The victor will inflict rage upon me, should I forgive or not,
    He changed his mind for the contempt of the better,
    The mightiest inside of me, forced me to prepare to fight the many armed spirits ahead,
    He does not like the mightiest or him because he prefers to take sides with the most power,
    Even though they shook his throne,
    They didn't lose their free will, revenge, immortal hate and courage.
    So they kept the courage to over come everything,
    Those who doubt his empire are lower than him,
    Everyone on gods side would prevail,
    As seen in this great event,
    Gods did prevail

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  5. Group 5:

    We may, with more hope be successful in resolving violence and war once and for all.
    So much different than our oppressor,
    Who now triumphs over all, overjoyed with their power, view themselves as a holy being.
    Even though in pain, speaking aggressively, but overcome by sorrow.
    And he then answered his peer,
    "Oh prince, Oh chief of the previous powers, that led the angry angels to war, under your conduct, and in horrible meaning, fearless, threatened the holy being, and threw down his supremecy, whether upheld by strength, or chance, or fate! Too well do I see this event that with a depressing charge and cruel defeat, has lost us the gift of Heaven, and the almighty god, in viscous destruction put us down, as long as gods and heavenly beings can perish: for the mind and spirit remains indestructible, and bravery soon returns, Though all of our glory is dissipated, and our happy state swallowed up in endless misery, but what if He, our conqueror (who I now believe is almighty, since no less than such could have overpowered such brute force as ours), have left us this our heart and mind full, strongly to perish and enjoy our pains, that we may so suffice his vengeful doings, or do him mightier service as his power.

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  6. Group 2
    Holly and Brad

    Adam and Eve were cast out of Heaven for sinning against their Creator. By eating the fruit from the tree of knowledge. For the devils deceit God and devil had a war; God cast him out from heaven into the depths of hell. The devil was bound in unbreakable chains and in a everlasting pit of fire. Time doesn't exist in Hell, the days and nights are nine times longer. The devil and his followers lay vanquished in the fiery pits of hell. In Hell no man is mortal, they are bound there for eternity; tormented by their sorrows and lost happiness. The devil today is still stubborn and refuses to see what he did wrong.

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  7. Group 3: Luke and John
    The bad situation. A horrible place was all around bad. A great fire shown, yet no light came through. Darkness was the only thing to be seen. Sights of extreme sadness, places of more sadness, lost spirits, where peace and rest can not be found. To those with no hope eternal torture will be brought. The fires and rotting smells can not be avoided. This place is prepared for those who rebel. Their prison is far away from God in Heaven, down where there's nothing but dark. this is not like where they came from.the followers of evil who thrashed about by his side were met with floods, whirlwinds and flames. Once known in Palestine as Beelzebub and Satan in heaven. if you are who i think you are how did you go from being from being such a sexy beast to being this disgusting creature?

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  8. Group 1: Mike and Bry -

    Eating the forbidden apple - man's first mistake - brought sadness and death upon our world. Eden was lost until Christ rose and restored us, regaining his throne. The Holy Spirit voice was heard by Moses, and he told the Jews about the creation of earth and how it came from chaos. Jerusalem was made, and God invited his people to join him in his holy city located on Mount Aonian. God gave mary a baby, which made moses happy, and gave God power over man with Eternal Providence.

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  9. Group 6: Courtney Bles and Elisabeth Eiler
    By the right of war, whatever his business is
    here in the center of hell, forced to work in fire
    and do his errands in the sad depressing deep
    what can it be then that we feel?
    Our strength is diminished
    To undergo eternal punishment
    where do we do with quick words the arch- fiend replied:
    Fallen Angel, to be weak is miserable
    Doing or Suffering, But be sure of this
    Doing bad deeds is our task
    To do wrong is our only pleasure
    to be contradictory to his good will
    Who we resist.
    Our evil looks to bring forth good
    Our labor must be to prevent that end
    And out of good, we still find evil
    which will often times succeed
    They will grieve him if I do not fail and upset
    His innermost voices
    But see, the angry winner has recalled
    His followers of vengeance will pursue
    Back to the gates of Heaven, the fiery Hail
    Shot after us in a storm, overblown it lay
    the fiery wave, coming from great peril
    The Heavens received us falling, and the thunder
    With red lightning, and great rage
    Perhaps has broken his will, but for now stops
    To yell through the vast and open deep
    Let us not slip with scorn
    To satisfy the fury and yield it from our enemy.

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